We are learning about persuasive writing, I used Pros & Cons and persuasive language….
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Reasons Why I Should Go to the Stray Kids Concert in Australia…
*Firstly, stray kids are a big part of my life. It would Change my life forever. I would pay for the flight. I would gladly do the dishes for 2 weeks. I will never ask for anything ever again….(Maybe)
So that’s why I should go to stray kids in Australia .
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Reasons why I should go to the Stray kids concert in Australia.
I Have been into Stray kids for 4 years now and they are a big part of my life and mental well being. I would pay for my flight to Australia and I would gladly do the dishes for month’s & clean me and Bella’s bathroom. If you are trying to Convince your parents (like me) let you go to a concert use These phrases:
I’ll pay, I promise. (Maybe) .
I will gladly do all the homework. (Even though I don’t have any) .
It would be life changing and better for my mental health.