Year: 2024

Persuasive writing

 

We are learning about persuasive writing, I used Pros & Cons and persuasive language….

Draft – 1 

 

Reasons Why I Should Go to the Stray Kids Concert in Australia… 

 

*Firstly, stray kids are a big part of my life. It would Change my life forever. I would pay for the flight. I would gladly do the dishes for 2 weeks. I will never ask for anything ever again….(Maybe) 

So that’s why I should go to stray kids in Australia .       

 

Draft- 2

 

Reasons why I should go to the Stray kids concert in Australia.

 

I Have been into Stray kids for 4 years now and they are a big part of my life and mental well being. I would pay for my flight to Australia and I would gladly do the dishes for month’s & clean me and Bella’s bathroom. If you are trying to Convince your parents (like me) let you go to a concert use These phrases:

I’ll pay, I promise. (Maybe) .

I will gladly do all the homework. (Even though I don’t have any) .

It would be life changing and better for my mental health.

 

Spencer park Camp

Spencer park Camp.

 

Next week i’m going to camp at Spencer park. I want to show success when i’m walking to Spencer park (It takes about two hours)  I would like to show resilience while walking too. I have to set up my tent by not breaking it.  I want to show integrity while putting up my tent. ME and my group have to cook dinner…So I want to show success. I am going to show integrity even when no one is looking.